I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora William. Wow. You are pretty good on the trampoline. I agree with Mrs Templeton about it being good if you had written an explanation at the beginning of your post. Good luck for the talent competition.
Nice job william. And those are some nice, nice flips!! After the lockdown, will you teach me some of the moves? oh, and maybe you should add some writing next time. I hope you win William!
Hi im jason from whakamanawa i liked how you done lots of flips then one trick over and over again and i liked the first flip and maybe do some more tricks.
Yay! Good job for posting your talent entry on your blog. Maybe you could add some writing to it to tell us what you are doing.
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DeleteKia ora William.
ReplyDeleteWow. You are pretty good on the trampoline. I agree with Mrs Templeton about it being good if you had written an explanation at the beginning of your post. Good luck for the talent competition.
that is awsome william i don't know how you did that i cant even do that your the best.
ReplyDeleteNice job william. And those are some nice, nice flips!! After the lockdown, will you teach me some of the moves? oh, and maybe you should add some writing next time. I hope you win William!
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DeleteAwesome moves on the Tramp William, I agree that either some writing or you explaining on your video would have been a good idea.
ReplyDeleteHi William that is so cool I like the part were you did a backfilp.
ReplyDeletehow many flips can you do in a minute?
hey man I'm simeli from whamawa
ReplyDeletegood JOb I hop you come up with a new treck 😲
ReplyDeleteYeah lol He did come up with a new trick I think?
DeleteHi im jason from whakamanawa i liked how you done lots of flips then one trick over and over again and i liked the first flip and maybe do some more tricks.
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DeleteHello i like how you done lots of flipes i like how you did a backflip.oh and maybe you could add more writting.
ReplyDeleteI should of.
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