I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Will, nice story it is really cool. it made me feel when i went afk and my team was protecting me, maybe add like a font or a different colour. can you put a picture of you and david. from your bro Harlin.
Kia ora will,Very nice story my friend. I like how you helped david get to 150k. maybe next time you could show a picture of you and David. My question is how long did you go for, as in how long where you gone to drink milo. From your best friend Joel
Kumusta William Your holiday sound interesting! I really like this it is very interesting! maybe next time you could proof read your slide thing because I found some mistakes like missing punctuation and some sentences that didn't make sence
Kumusta William this is Raewyn from next door. I am pretty sure you had a better holiday than me! I did see you in the google meet sometimes with my brother. Bye William!
Kia ora Will, nice story it is really cool. it made me feel when i went afk and my team was protecting me, maybe add like a font or a different colour. can you put a picture of you and david. from your bro Harlin.
ReplyDeleteKia ora will,Very nice story my friend. I like how you helped david get to 150k. maybe next time you could show a picture of you and David. My question is how long did you go for, as in how long where you gone to drink milo. From your best friend Joel
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I really like this it is very interesting!
maybe next time you could proof read your slide thing because I found some mistakes like missing punctuation and some sentences that didn't make sence
Great Job!
Kumusta William this is Raewyn from next door. I am pretty sure you had a better holiday than me! I did see you in the google meet sometimes with my brother. Bye William!
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