I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Will, it's Nathan again and this is cool! At the slide you made a slight mistake. At the title it said "what I want to be when YOU grow up." but it's okay and again this is cool.
Kia ora William. I really like the title page of your slide. It's so appropriate for your topic. I am pretty sure that when you are a pilot your family still pay but maybe get a really good discount. Maybe you should aim to own the airline and then your family could fly for free. Ask Matthew to show you how to add more posts to your blog over lockdown time. It would be good to see some of your recent learning.
I really like your background in the title. thats smart that you can go on a flight for free and get soo much money. I wnat to be a pilot too. you sould put like picture of the plane you want to ride.
thats awesome you know a lot of plane names but i found in jet plane it was jet plan
ReplyDeleteHi William I like how you put facts and like how much you will get paid next time explain what plain you want to fly.
DeleteHi William! This is so cool. I never knew that you could earn a lot of money being a pilot!!!
ReplyDeleteHey Willam, it's cool to get to know all these planes. I am going to be a pilot to when I grow up to it will be cool.
ReplyDeletenic job you can make a lot of money you will be rich
ReplyDeletewhen you grow up.
Hi Will, it's Nathan again and this is cool! At the slide you made a slight mistake. At the title it said "what I want to be when YOU grow up." but it's okay and again this is cool.
ReplyDeleteKia ora William.
ReplyDeleteI really like the title page of your slide. It's so appropriate for your topic. I am pretty sure that when you are a pilot your family still pay but maybe get a really good discount. Maybe you should aim to own the airline and then your family could fly for free.
Ask Matthew to show you how to add more posts to your blog over lockdown time. It would be good to see some of your recent learning.
I really like your background in the title. thats smart that you can go on a flight for free and get soo much money. I wnat to be a pilot too. you sould put like picture of the plane you want to ride.
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